BEFORE:
My name is Marina
Carrillo and I’m 16 years old. I live in a little village called Sant Miquel de
Fluvià, situated in Alt Empordà. I used to live in Barcelona but I moved here
when I was 5 years old. Some things I like are hanging out with friends,
watching movies and videos on Youtube, making exercise and spending my time
with my family, friends and boyfriend. There are not many things that I don’t
like.
Last year I studied
4th ESO. It was a good year because I was in the same class that my friends
were in, I took good marks and it was fun overall. Apart from 4th ESO, the rest
of high school years were just as good, though also a bit difficult.
This year I started
Batxillerat. I’m so scared because I think that this year will be so much
harder than the previous ones and I want to take the best marks possible so
it’s easier for me to access University. It also feels different because the
classmates have radically changed and I miss my friends.
AFTER:
Dear teacher,
My name is Marina
Carrillo and I’m 16 years old. I live in a little village called Sant Miquel de
Fluvià, situated in Alt Empordà. I used to live in Barcelona but I moved here
when I was 5 years old. Some things I like are hanging out with friends,
watching movies and videos on Youtube, doing exercise and spending my time
with my family, friends and boyfriend. There are not many things that I don’t
like.
Last year I studied
4th ESO. It was a good year because I was in the same class that my friends
were in, I got good marks and it was fun overall. Apart from 4th ESO, the rest
of high school years were just as good, though also a bit difficult.
This year I started
Batxillerat. I’m so scared because I think that this year will be so much
harder than the previous ones and I want to take the best marks possible so
it’s easier for me to access University. It also feels different because the
classmates have radically changed and I miss my friends.
Best regards, Marina Carrillo.
